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30 de mayo de 2008

REVENGE by Lucía Massaro


This happened last month. The weather was rainy and cloudy. I invited my friend to watch a movie, it was a horror movie. My mother prepared pop corn to my friend and I that was delicious.

The film started and the house was calm but after ten minutes we were very scared so we started to shout. The people in the film were horrible and the place was noisy so we started running all around the house.

My brother Tomás, that was in the kitchen, decided to frighten us with a mask. I went to the kitchen so I heard what my brother wanted to do. So I told my friend called Camila and she had a plan.

The plan was we had to simulate we were sleeping so when he wanted to frighten us he would think that we were sleeping and instead of tricking us he would fall asleep too. So we went to bed simulating to be sleeping. Tomás came with his horrible mask and wanted to scare us, but he saw us sleeping and he felt disappointed of what he found. He went to bed too. Our plan was perfectly well. We waited for half an hour and we woke up to finish the last part of our plan: we started doing strange noises. So, my brother woke up to see what was happening. I took the mask and a knife to simulate that I wanted to kill him. So, then he saw me, he ran to his bedroom shouting.

That was the last day my brother bothered me!

2 comentarios:

Sofia dijo...

what a beautifull story!!!

Sofia dijo...

lucia dijo...
pobre tu hermano!!
pero yo le hubiese echo lo mismo