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30 de mayo de 2008

ONE DAY WITH MY FRIEND by Nicole Puentes


This happened last year in December 23rd in an evening with my friend. We went to Stars. It was a great restaurant, the food was delicious and we had a good time! There the people were generous and the place was wonderful.

Then my friend went to the garden and saw a person who was killing a man and my friend was shocked and ran to tell me and she said: “Nicole! In the garden there was a killer!” I went to see tha man but he was not there! I told my friend Victoria: “Is your imagination!” Victoria didn´t feel well, she looked pale. After that I talked with my mum and dad and we went to the hospital. Victoria was ok.

An then I was at home. Victoria had a dream, she took the phone, she dialed my number and she told me that she had to kill a person. Then I went to her house and she killed herself.

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