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28 de mayo de 2008

THE MYSTERIOUS NIGHT by Camila Natuche

Now I am going to tell you how a beautiful and lovely day can turn into a horrible and silly day.

Last year Carolina, Jone, Zac and I were walking in the street having fun. We walked and walked a lot of streets. Suddenly we saw a huge and nice forest in front of us. We were thinking about going in. It was evening, all was calm. We started playing and running, suddenly we heard a very noisy and horrible thunder. We started being scared.

The night came and the forest was dangerous. After that we saw a little and awful house and we walked to it. We knocked at the door and an old woman opened. Zac told the woman what was happening and the old woman let us in. Next, the old woman cooked a strange food, I don´t know what it was, we tried to eat it but we couldn´t, it was horrible! Then we went to sleep in a little bedroom. We started hearing a lot of strange noises, like bats. We woke up and we left Carolina behind because she was sleeping.

We saw a light in the kitchen so we approached. We saw the old woman with a knife. Zac was very scared so he decided to go back to the bedroom. He entered and he realized that Carolina was not there! He came and told that to us so we started thinking that the old woman wanted to kill Carolina. We enetred the kitchen and Carolina was sitting on a chair having tea!

5 comentarios:

Academy IDNA and Double Shift dijo...

The ending is fantastic! Good twist!

Sofia dijo...

what a beautiful story!!!

Anónimo dijo...

Just a nice and classic plot. I am really fond of child`s tales and I like the way they can go into typical narrative forms while they learn English.
Congratulations

Anónimo dijo...

jee , i love my story
:)

Anónimo dijo...

esta muy buena